Page 186 - August 16, 2012

Trying out some special panel layouts on this page, can't really decide If I like the result or not. But the panel sequence in the middle does serve a purpose by showing some change in weather rather than just being there to look clever or something. On the subject of weather, I'm not sure if the slight snowfall coupled of with sunlight has come off as strange to people. Yes, the sun is setting by the horizon and the clouds haven't quite been covering that area, so it's not weird dream magic in the action, but I don't really think I've portrayed that very clearly. Sure, it's obvious to me since I've got it all in my head, but it's hard to tell how much of that is actually coming across to the average reader. :/

...Yeah, I definitely need a commenting system, that's becoming clear. I'll start looking into that, maybe get one in place by the end of the month.

The ink linearts for pages 184-186 are up as a new vote incentive for TopWebComics. Putting them up in small bunches seems like a good idea, that way those who want to view the page originals and compare them to the finished result may do so, but I don't have to bother with changing the file every day. :3